Nobody's Angel

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    Kate

    Kate beat me senseless LPA Super Member

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    She's a solitary figure
    Hands hanging at her sides
    She's got that golden halo
    What good is it to her?
    She's innocent yet cynical
    Sweet but stained by bitterness

    She's got passion to release
    A reputation she must keep
    But nobody really cares
    Because she's nobody's angel.

    She's regretting every day
    That nobody ever wanted her
    She's white as winter's snow
    Pure and crystal as a diamond
    She's caring but won't show it
    And shy above all else

    She's got passion to release
    A reputation she must keep
    But nobody really cares
    Because she's nobody's angel.

    She's burning to let it go
    Emotions tearing at her sanity
    She's always been so innocent
    But it doesn't matter now
    She's far beyond her breaking point
    The knife is sharp and ready

    She had passion to release
    She had a reputation to keep
    It's all over and she kept it
    But it doesn't matter now
    And nobody really cared
    Because she was nobody's angel.


    Opinions? Comments would be nice, feel free to comment on the rest of my stuff.
     
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    Hybrid Soldier

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    the best work i've read yet. 10/10 :)
     
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    Kate

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    wow, thanks.
     
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    can u do another one? er..... :blush:
     
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    Shade

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    Thats great! Good one :)
     
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    Anthony.

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    Excellent, keep up the good work!
     
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    Terry

    Terry Yeah, but I wish you were my shadow. LPA Super Member

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    I read the words "Nobody's Angel" and immediately thoughy of Dido. Awesome lil' ditty you got there.
     
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    Steph

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    That was great! I love the title too....
     

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