The glass falls to the floor, pieces shattered everywhere. I kneel and pick up a piece. I hold it in my closed hand, my eyes closed but the tears start to fall. I raise my arm and red tears fall as my bare skin meets the glass. Pain is all I feel, pain thats now in my heart, was in my head. I bleed, bleed, watching the blood, so red, dripping. I'm breathing deeply and I'm blinded by tears. I drop to the glass and fall to the ground, now i feel nothing. I close my eyes and savour my last breath. It wasn't written in any order or anything like that because I just wrote it after that happened to me. Yeah, so I'm open to critisism!!
i hope you dont take any offence to this its good, but i think it could be better with more work, but nobodys perfect at our age, if you keep writing lyrics, you will become very talented
Thanks...Like I said, it was written on anger..not really changed from what I wrote at the time...but thanks anyways!
what can I say after so many words were said????? I liked this song very much, it's so real (you know what i wanna say )