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    Joe

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    Lost in the line where the equilibrium distorts
    Balanced by the difference of our words & thoughts
    Still trying to push through the senses I've lost
    I'm still trying to remember what it is I've forgot
    This puzzle has no answer, this riddle has no clue
    The questions that I ask just take me further from you

    Colorless pictures & unreadable letters
    Speaking meaningless words out loud to help me feel better
    Hypocritical judgment decides what's best for me
    Cryptic opinions measured with abstract symmetry
    Emotionless expression defines the silence and how I got it
    Distanced by saying one thing and meaning the opposite

    I never knew I could suffer through what appears surreal
    Hoping my dreams can describe what it is I feel
    I stop closing my eyes before I even get there
    Thinking it's a contradiction based on why I care
    To juxtapose the elements that makes this worth living
    Is to wait to see if the answer can be more forgiving
     
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    Louis

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    Great job, Joe. Excellent.
     
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    esaul17

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    Agreed. I loved the dialogue.
     
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    Luke

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    Awesome Joe. Well done mate. :)
     
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    Joe

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    Thanks for the comments guys, I appreciate them. :thumbsup:
     
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    Flaming_turqoise

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    That was great!!
     
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    Joe

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    Thank you. :)
     
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    Linja

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    I said this once to Darcy, and I'm saying it again to you. You rhyme ridiculously well.
     
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    very good, loved it!
     
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    Joe

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    Thanks for the comments Mali & sickcycle. :)
     

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