Theme: Angst ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Nightmare's pawn: I've been set out in the cold as the spawn of your inadequacy Neither will nor opinion were left to survive your constricting heresy I've fought for every breath of air and so I consist of no more than scars Seared skin and dust inside where no-one dares to touch my punctured heart Don't hold my hand, I know you won't help No, don't hold my hand, You know how I felt ... know how I felt, know how I felt all alone in hell I've felt you reaching out to me, as I've skipped heartbeats through the perilous dark You cried of rabies and rage, and so you have driven us both further apart Don't hold my hand, I know you won't help No, don't hold my hand, You know how I felt ... know how I felt, know how I felt all alone in hell Don't hold my hand You've brought this hell Don't hold my hand You've brought me hell
It's kinda funny how you wrote 'Theme: Angst' at the start, were you thinking it was like your older pieces when you wrote that? Anyways i thought it was pretty good, it definately conveyed the emotions set in the piece.
Yeah...I kinda felt it was similar to my older style, when I read it. It's thought out better than my older poems and the wording flows better, but still. Also, thank you @Ataka: Define emo. (just wondering what you mean...)