Newborn

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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    This may seem disturbing at first, but it's not about actually eating someone. Just try digging a little deeper.

    Feedback would be appreciated very much.


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    Newborn:

    Into the night
    we pour our hearts
    We sink skin-deep
    as our ways part

    Eat me, eat me!
    Eat me, eat me!

    This family eats the newborn whole
    skin and bones / heart and soul
    This family eats the newborn whole
    sickness, decay / maggots, mold

    Our addiction blends
    with our distress
    Quite disturbing,
    this grotesque mess

    The newborn lives,
    fueled by pain
    Raged inside,
    born insane

    Eat me! Eat me!
    Eat me! Eat me!

    This family eats the newborn whole
    skin and bones / heart and soul
    This family eats the newborn whole
    sickness, decay / maggots, mold

    Let it go!
    Let it eat!
    Let it go!
    Let it eat!
     
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    Jordan

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    Interesting. I wouldn't mind hearing you interpretation, but i have a vague idea of what you mean.
     
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    Seinfeld

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    A few days ago, I was hanging out with a huge group of people.
    That group was divided into yet again another 4 to 5 groups. They didn't like each other much. For some reason, I got along perfectly fine with everyone but I felt a little torn back and forth between the groups. I see myself as the newborn, since I was the newest member to each of the groups. I imagined what it would be like to be born into two different clans that couldn't stand each other...how sickening it must be to be aware of what mess you're stuck in. Being torn back and forth, basically being picked apart over something you have nothing to do with.
     
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    Jordan

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    Oh that's interesting. Replacing you with a newborn baby creates a pretty strong message. Nice work.
     
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    Arhaz

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    fucking shit...i could hear you bang tables and chant the verses in my head..in my head...in my head...
    see what you're doing to me! this just proves the power of this piece..of this piece, of this piece.
     

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