new song tell me what you think plz....

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    LINKINFREAK

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    ENDLESS LIES

    Verse 1
    endless lies have sunkin in
    eventually they will comfort my world ive created
    hopeless trust ive lost within
    eventually it will occupy this world ive hated

    Pre Chorus
    when you hold my faith against my pride
    theres nothing left for me to love inside

    Chorus
    i know someday all i'll see is black
    for you i hope its the same / you wont know what to do
    i know someday all i'll see is black
    i just need someone to blame / i just dont know who

    Verse 2
    careless mistakes have torn me apart
    eventually they will haunt my world much more
    helpless screams have filled my heart
    eventually they will destroy this world ive ignored

    Pre Chorus
    when you hold my past against my will
    theres nothing left for me thats real

    Chorus
    i know someday all i'll see is black
    for you i hope its the same / you wont know what to do
    i know someday all i'll see is black
    i just need someone to blame / i just dont know who

    Bridge
    is this what you really fear
    imagine the way i feel
    i cant believe your still hear
    you ll soon realise this all so real

    Chorus
    i know someday all i'll see is black
    for you i hope its the same / you wont know what to do
    i know someday all i'll see is black
    i just need someone to blame / i just dont know who
     
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    Cal

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    this is nice, it flows well, i had a tune in my head while reading it

    9/10

    nice work, keep it up, your very talented :)
     
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    LINKINFREAK

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    thanks alot for that man its really appreciated
     

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