New Piece To An Old Puzzle

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    SecondCityKids

    SecondCityKids Hey John, What's Your Name Again? LPA Super Member

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    Short intro on this. This is my first writing post-Reyna(Havik27)
    So you can kind of tell that this isnt going to be nice about her.
    It isnt to harsh though its more about the after effect. I like it because it captures a tone that I have been trying catch. That being I wanted one to sound angry instead of sad. This piece is actually called "New Piece To An Old Puzzle (Make The Earth Shake)" but I figured adding that last part was kind of pointless. So tell me what you think
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    Tired of the madness, this time I’m done
    Look in the shadows. You’ll find no sun
    You’ll find me there thinking this through
    Coming to the conclusion that I’m done with you

    You are now another piece of my history
    A piece to a puzzle, an unsolved mystery
    Even though this hurts more then I admit
    I refuse to sit here and just quit

    I’ll get you back for putting me through this
    Just another name on this long list
    You may want to pretend you don’t hear me
    But now I’m screaming everything so clearly

    Even now as you stand at a distance
    You can still be a witness
    To the day I make this damn earth shake
    Destroying everything like an earthquake

    Looking at the city as it’s torn apart
    It will remind me of the time you broke my heart
    Just another chapter in this book
    I’m taking back the heart that you took
     

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