New Found Symmetry

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    Darcy

    Darcy LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    I'm not sure if this is good enough to use it for a song yet, but I'll see what you all think before I decide to discard it or edit it.

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    New Found Symmetry

    Would it all just be a tribute
    To your new found parallels
    If you'd pause for just a second
    Just to say you're doing well
    Have we all made sacrifices
    For your new found symmetry
    Or that loyal incarnation
    That you've tried too hard to be

    Are we just so hyperactive
    That we need to fill our arms
    Do we all just sign the papers
    With our reasons to discard
    So I curse god damned persistence
    I don't want to play this part
    Of a life in steady motion
    When they flip the wild card

    Just wait in line
    You can take my place in time
    But if you're looking for an answer
    Then you'll have to realize
    We don't ask why
    And we just don't have the time
    If you notice any difference
    Then you'll have to step aside
    We don't ask why

    I think we've all just been applying
    For a better point of view
    Or maybe we're just too dead set on
    Waking up to something new
    But I hope you're not discouraged
    By your disappointed youth
    We are just a small reminder
    Of the life that you once knew
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    I loved the last verse. Another job well done, Darcy.
     
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    sickcycle

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    very nice, the last verse is the best like maranwe said
     
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    Darcy

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    Thanks both of you!

    Group hug! ^_^
     
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    Joe

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    Amazing. I loved every line. Another great piece that I enjoyed reading. Excellent job. :thumbsup:
     
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    sickcycle

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    *hand reaches a little low* I love group hugs!
     
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    Darcy

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    Joe: Thanks a bunch!

    Sickcycle: I'm not exactly sure what you mean about the hand reaching thing,(I'm kinda dense...) but I do agree that group hugs are wonderful!
     
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    Linja

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    He means that when he was hugging you, his hand "slipped."

    :shifty: :lol:
     
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    Darcy

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    Oh! Haha, I feel stupid now for not catching on. I guess my mind just isn't dirty enough... :p

    But in that case...my hand just "slipped" and I just happened to slap him in the face...total accident I swear.
     
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    Linja

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    You can rent my apartment in the gutter :lol:
     
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    Darcy

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    You know, that would actually be a really good line in a song. :p
     
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    Linja

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    Jes' call me inspiro-girl. :lol:
     
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    brilliant. Fucking. Brilliant.
     
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    esaul17

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    It's a nice piece. I love the title. The verse is great as so many others have said.
     
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    Darcy

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    :D Thanks muchly!

    And thankyou too esaul!
     

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