My world Don't close ur eyes, when i'm cryin Don't close ur eyes, when I get abused Don't close ur eyes, when the world is against me Don't close ur eyes, when i'm hurting myself Don't close ur eyes, when i try to dream Don't close ur eyes, when i get lost in my memory Don't close ur eyes, when I fell wortless Don't close ur eyes, when i'm dying Don't close ur eyes, when i can't breath Don't close ur eyes, when i lose the control of reality Don't close ur eyes, when i need ur help....
That's awesome! Very good, but next time, try something without all the repetition. Twas good this time, but can get incessant after a while.