My Underworld

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    Evi

    Evi Super Member LPA Super Member

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    wow! i finally wrote a new song :) . It's sad but i feel ####ed up today,so that's what my song is about

    please comment :p
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    My Underworld
    I just woke up today , after dreaming for so long
    I just faced the reality today, and it’s harder than I can take
    I’ve just realised, that pain is a beautiful word
    But when the meaning shows trough
    It’s even more

    Cause the more you take the harder I rot away
    The more I break, The harder you seem to enjoy
    The harder I laugh, The more you look sad
    The more I give, The more you take

    Caught in my world
    Giving sins of suicide
    Feeling manipulated
    By Any Of You


    All the fear that overcome me, I’ve waited for so long
    To enjoy what I had, and never wanted more
    You changed what I never had , in a meantime you were mine
    But than the heartache came up, and it’s all just screwed up again

    The more I give away, the harder I feel suicidal
    The more I dream, The reality just gets harder
    The more I cry, The more you seem to smile
    The more you take, The more I give

    Caught in my world
    Giving sins of suicide
    Feeling manipulated
    By Any Of You


    I don’t want to cry all again
    I’ve wasted enough tears on you
    You made me alive again
    But that doesn’t mean you have to #### me up
    So break the ache again
    Break the ache again


    Caught in my world
    Giving sins of suicide
    Feeling manipulated
    By Any Of You

    Break the ache again
     
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    arT saveS

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    Sounds like Staind.


    `nuff said.
















    ...meaning I like it.
     
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    Evi

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    thnx :p .. actually i don't listen to staind :lol:
     
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    Dr. Satan

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    Nice song man. I wish I could write....
     
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    Evi

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    thnx :D
     
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    Aplace_4_MyHead

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    totaly awesome. excelent stuff.
    Keep it up iwanna read more.
     

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