My song "If The World Stood Burning"

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    ptto911

    ptto911 Well-Known Member

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    Hello,
    I'd just like to share one of my newer songs, entitled "If The World Stood Burning", which features rapping by Pakkun Purgatory and singing by myself, and will be going on my new EP or album. Any feedback would be great. Thank you.

    SoundCloud (better sound quality if you download the MP3):

    Lyric video:
    [video=youtube;H__5bmN7h0w]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H__5bmN7h0w[/video]

    Find more music by me here:
    http://soundcloud.com/ptto911
     
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    travz21

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    I like everything a lot except for the bridge. I don't know what you were trying for there. It's almost painful. The vocals sound way out of whack there, like you put a bad saturation effect on it or just used a bad mic.

    The instrumental is good. I like the singing voice, too. The bridge just needs reworking or different mixing or just to be redone completely imo.
     
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    ptto911

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    Thank you. That was Pakkun's rapping and wasn't recorded very well. He'll hopefully redo it sometime.
     

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