......MY NEW SONG TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK PLZZZZZ..

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    LINKINFREAK

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    TOMMORROW
    INTRO
    tomorow feels so far away
    tomorow is nowhere near
    tomorow seems so far away
    tomorow i fear

    VERSE 1
    i tried so hard to wake up from this dream
    i fought for so long just to open my eyes
    i searched so far to find out what it means
    but all along this life was nothing but lies
    maybe in time you'll understand
    this is the way i want it to be
    maybe i dont know who i am
    but at least i know whats waiting for me

    CHORUS
    im not gonna let anyone hold me down (not anymore)
    ive been pushed away
    this time im letting go
    im not gonna let anyone bring me down (not anymore)
    im waiting for the day
    when thers no tomorow

    VERSE 2
    i closed the door on me for the last time
    i remember the way my life used to be
    i plan to ignore all the pain this time
    coz i know im the one here that holds the key
    maybe ill see the end of tonight
    if i can find a way to escape
    maybe its time to end this fight
    cant save me now your all to late

    CHORUS

    BRIDGE
    i deserve more than all of this
    how did it end up so dark
    how can i wake up like this
    ending this pain before it starts

    CHORUS
     
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    arT saveS

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    It sounds like it's a song with no meaning that you just through together in a few minutes...half of it doesn't even make sense.
    And you say the exact same thing each time, just with different words.
     
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    Anthony.

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    Not so bad... But don't type in Caps (see title of the topic) please ;) .
     
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    Jamie

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    This is one of those songs that I don't get :mellow: it lost me
     

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