My new rap

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    ReanimatedDJ

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    Well I’m back again for a-nother verse
    This’ll sure give you a-nother curse
    Hearin my rhymes they will make yo head spin
    They’re like a fist that keeps hittin yo chin

    All night-long I be hearin you whine
    That hearing my rap should be a crime
    Cause I break your head and leave you violated
    U be like “wow” especially constipated

    I’m sick of this, I’m sick of you
    This is not over for you to screw
    So keep your words in your mouth
    Before I smack you up all in the dirty south

    The sun sets, and the darkness comes out
    Not only in the sky but also in me, Bust out!
    Here comes the darkness
    The illness even my skillness

    Where is the competition? no intuition
    Rapping better than me, boy that never was yo mission
    Although there is a conception
    A plan!….That ill win and leave u in yo session

    There is only one condition
    All rusted up and no commission
    Get on the corner, try rappin there
    People be walkin by, they don’t even care

    Yo momma can’t even stare
    She always told you to share, “boy don’t you dare”
    My rhymes are like a conspiracy
    They hit you up like a dose of ecstasy

    You’re an embarrassment to the human race
    You gonna get choked with my shoelace
    Oh good grace! Even the army is tellin you stop
    The army base and so is the navy base arguin nonstop

    My music is sometimes Techno
    But listenin to your pop, Oh hell no!
    Forget that I aint that idiotic
    This is it, its totally psychotic

    Its Aquatic its gonna be wet
    After this beat’s over your gonna be in debt
    Oh no sweat its just a threat
    You’re better off smokin a marijuana cigarette

    Check this, Mic check 1, 2, 3
    You gonna get strangled, they call you the dead emcee
    Ya buried already, from you daddy’s HIV
    You damn well be, Just go back to the Mediterranean Sea

    This is so not angelic, it’s more devil like
    You never stood a chance at the sympathetic strike
    You are so pathetic, you thought you could be more poetic
    This is genetic research, it’s so magnetic, so energetic

    So you put your money where your mouth is
    Cause rappin like this you wont even make it in the biz
    You wont even come close
    This is over, its done, adios!
     
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    [chali]

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    wow that was good...bit like my style in way when i read it lol but mine is straight up disses with clever words :)
     
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    ReanimatedDJ

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    thanks chali, thats cool that you liked it im glad, i might have some time to do another one in a couple of days
     
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    Andrea

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    I like it. Very good. :)
     
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    ReanimatedDJ

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    thanks, im writing one a new one pretty soon
     
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    _PianoPaPercut_

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    nice rap.. not an expert on it though.. but yeah.. i liked those lines.. probably cos they made me laugh.. [i dnt think im sane right now.. its so late.. o_O] good work though..!
     
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    Jamie

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    I like it
     

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