Music My music project called "Alluders"

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    Hermes_LP

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    I wanna share with you songs from my music project called "Alluders", which can be considered a kind of "one man band".
    I want to propose two songs, the first one is called "Dark shine":


    The second one is "Lost in labyrinths":


    I don't know what genre I do, I think I don't move on one genre in particular 'cause I always try to experiment combining different elements but..You can try to assign a genre for me! :lol: Can't wait to listen your opinions! :)

    If you want, you can subscribe on my YouTube channel for more songs! (I make instrumental and ambient stuff too)
     
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    Modern Guitar God

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    Do you have SoundCloud? I will listen to this tomorrow.
     
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    Hermes_LP

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    The production quality is on point and I like your guitar playing. Drums, sampling, and synths are also really good. I don't think the singing is there yet - a lot of times, the soft and whispery vocals don't help lift the song. Maybe try a fuller voice on these same songs and see how that sounds?

    I think the sound design and production is good, again.
     
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    minuteforce

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    I agree. The production is alright, but I can't enjoy the vocals at all.
     
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    Hermes_LP

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    Sorry for the vocals guys, I'm not a real singer...but, you know, I try :lol:
    Some of my songs need vocals and someone has to do..I think that's my style: whisperings, strange vocal parts and so on..I know there's a possibility that people may not like it, but I think this is the only way to sing these songs and I enjoy it, but thanks for the criticism! :)
    Also appreciated your compliments about the production!
     

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