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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    Darkness and alone


    I last regenerated this state of mind,
    This lasting helpless state of mine,
    Tried to lose it a day back or two,
    But it all comes down to you know who….

    Freakin’ lost control over my life,
    Like usin’ the dagger instead of the knife,
    Kind of locked in, though I’m left out,
    Shut up…..and I freakin’ scream, shout….

    This life ends for you…
    In the same manner that you do…
    Dying like these age old black jeans I wear,
    Dying like my soul, but who freakin’ cares?

    I’m lost in my state of time,
    Commit myself to this lonely crime,
    I can’t feel the second’s hand scraping me,
    Taking from me, a part of what I’m meant to be.

    As I walk alone down the midnight park,
    Notice how it not fenced the shrilling dark,
    As if the thousand lights burning were not there,
    The dawdling thought to loneliness, it scares.



    hope you like it!
     
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    kotrunks

    kotrunks Well-Known Member

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    very good, longer than some of mine. Very good.
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    thank you! ^_^


    any other comments?
     

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