No one comments on what I write, but I continue to post. Hope somebody is enjoying them. Wrote this this morning. ---------------------------------------------- My hair, it has so many layers I don't think that you could see them all I jumped up on the first eyesight The first chance at a successful marriage You won't shop a bit I won't allow you to stay at the store I won't hold your hand But I hope that you will follow close behind Hold my hand if you want, but I can't hold yours If you were to beg me to, I would, but this isn't happening You can't hold my hand when I'm in control I can't show that you can let me go I can't be a better partner than this I want a guarantee and not a random miss Does my total badassness behavior bother you? Well, it's not real, so I hope that doesn't, either. I'm not the person that you met yesterday Now that you living here I like spaghetti
I commented on your other stuff through MSN! lol I liked this piece though, a bit less abstract than your other stuff. Good job. "You can't hold my hand when I'm in control I can't show that you can let me go" I really loved that part. Great piece.