My First Song

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    Imprint

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    This is my first piece of work here. I hope you like it. I wrote after I read someone else's diary, and instead of confronting them, I wrote a song about it. It's not finished, but I thought I'd post it.

    a diary kept under raps
    a comment like a lethal trap
    words seem disturbing
    sickened by what your are now learning
    like a desire still burning
    expressing your thoughts
    truth releaved appears to be distraught
    angered by what was said
    if you keep reading you'll be dead
    disappointed in yourself and in another
    self-realization as you continue
    what is next on the menu

    how could this be
    why'd you have to say those things about me
    can't you see
    you've deceiving yourself
    bound by the thoughts in your head
    were these the desires that you blead

    why must you put on an act
    as a matter of fact
    this is what you lack
    dedication to what's real
    it is apparent that you can't feel
    you can't feel for others
    you can't feel their pain
    f_ck you you're insane
    hiding all this sh_t in a diary
    f_ck this you didn't even believe in me
     
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    Mark

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    I think it's great!
     
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    Hybrid Soldier

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    thats a great piece. ;)
     

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