my first poem

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    Dart

    Dart Well-Known Member

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    Dart, Dec 4, 2007



    Eternity

    She enlightened me,
    love is so much,
    heartless reinventing.
    Shadows and me,
    crawling,stalking
    running,crying.
    Follow me,
    even if you,
    never wanted.
    Shoot me,
    yes my darling,
    do it again


    i see it as a mix of morbid symbols produced by a stream of consciousness...

    bury me :D
     
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    Speed Freak

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    Speed Freak, Dec 29, 2007



    Wow

    OMG!!! I luv ur poem....Its deep if u analyse it.:)
     
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    The Emptiness Machine

    The Emptiness Machine Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    The Emptiness Machine, Jan 2, 2008



    It's good in a random kinda way lol
     

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