Standing in the middle, watching everything pass by Listening to the words you speak, feeling like I want to die Everything you said that day, just doesn’t seem so real Wanting those words to be a lie, just wanting not to feel. The truth injected into me, drowned my deadly heart The way that you just turned away, tore it all apart Knowing that you never cared, made me go insane Causing me to build a wall to block out all the pain. Nothing I could do or say, would make you change your mind Nothing that you said that day, could help you draw the line These days I just sit and stare, at your picture on my wall Hoping that your dead some where, maybe from a fall.
LMAO...your computer is stuffin up or you clicked the 'add reply' button 3 times lol....dont worry....hey I just found an error in my own poem....how nice Thanks for your comments though man...I have more just waiting for the right time to post them....
Awsome, this was really hearfelt and emotional, had alot of power, and that's what i really love in a poem, great job.