My crucifix

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    Adam

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    My crucifix

    Its gotta flow through me
    I can’t think straight unless I breathe freely
    I’ve tried so hard to break away
    But nothings gonna ever change
    Don’t lie to me ‘cause one day we’re all gonna die
    And when there’s no one left…
    Life will be one big conspiracy

    Give me some space
    Give me some time
    Just leave me for a while
    Stop harassing me I’ll tell you when I’m fine

    Place me on my crucifix
    Lay me down to rest, let me face my bloody end
    Surround by sinners but they’re now the only people I can call my friends
    I feel so broken, I feel like this going wrong
    Ignore my plea let me pace the consequence
    Let me face my bloody end

    Come join me in my world domination
    Imagine if we took it over, imagine we could set it off
    We could rule it all together
    Because in each others hearts we’ll never die
    We could rule it all forever

    Place me on my crucifix
    Lay me down to rest, let me face my bloody end
    Surround by sinners but they’re now the only people I can call my friends
    I feel so broken, I feel like this going wrong
    Ignore my plea let me pace the consequence
    Let me face my bloody end

    Watch me scream, watch me bleed
    Everyone around me is following my lead
    This is inhumane…

    Place me on my crucifix
    Lay me down to rest, let me face my bloody end

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    This song is supposed to sound very slow and heavy but also very depressing.
     
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    Pretty good :) ;)
     
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    Thanx for the comment ^_^ . I think I could have done better but I havent written for a while.
     
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    I could imagin this song being on the soundtrack to the film 'Passion Of Christ'
     
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    Is that a good or bad thing :mellow:
     
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    Good thing :D
     
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    Good job. A lot of the song/.poem sounded like something out of Linkin Park! And, for me, thats a good thing. I like the line "Place me on my crucifix." You have a very smooth ending and intro :) . Great job.
     
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    Thanx ^_^
     

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