Hope you like this song, we're in the middle of getting the guitar parts done. When they're complete we'll send them off to our drummer and bassist so they can do their thing and hopefully make the song sound awesome Edit: I think it needs a better title. Note: Italics mean that it's going to be screamed with singing over it Underlined means it's whispered "Just Because I'm Not A Follower, Doesn't Mean I Don't Believe That Religion Works" This water tastes like blood, So I just cannot get enough, It's like it's opened new doors, Which had been nailed shut before, It's like a breath of fresh air, Running my hands through your hair, Just to get a better feel, Of feelings I hoped were real, This winter tastes like death, The condensation from your breath, And all the other girls lips, That I decided to kiss, Lady luck's not that lucky, Anymore, She's been put back in her place, By the things that she saw. God's holding onto glory, And I'm not into blasphemy, But what can I do, When he decides to curse me? He's so fucking cruel. Is it possible for my vision to have, Over night, Gotten worse, worse, worse? And I, I, know, know, the truth, truth, the truth, And it doesn't work. God likes to punish those, Who are dealing all too well, To point out that they are, Steps away from hell, And that donating blood, Does not make up for kiss and tell, And even if they are in love, They can only save themselves. God's holding onto glory, And I'm not into blasphemy, But what can I do, When he decides to curse me? If I was lord and master, flailing 'round the globe, I'd prove my every feeling to be right, I'd fold my arms neatly upon mere mortals entering, I'd make the setting sun rise more slowly at the end of the night. Is it possible for my vision to have, Over night, Gotten worse, worse, worse? And I, I, know, know, the truth, truth, the truth, But my god religion works. Father, father, glorious father, Father, father, glorious father, Father, father, glorious father, You failed us all, you're no martyr, Father, father, glorious father, Father, father, glorious father, Father, father, glorious father, Failure, mother, brother, daughter.
I think it's really good but you might want to repeat certain parts so when people listen to it for the first time they feel like they've already heard it and by doing that you could put some more whispers in there between the parts you repeat. I really like it, wish I could hear it when it's done !
Thats a really good song Sounds like a Nothingface song Are they one of your inspirations? Keep up the good work