My Angel

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by LornVourkolakas, Feb 6, 2004.

  1. #1
    LornVourkolakas

    LornVourkolakas About To Blow Chunks

    Joined:
    Aug 14, 2003
    Messages:
    2,628
    Likes Received:
    25



    I entered this poem in a contest. Yes, I've been writing "lovey dovey" songs a lot lately. Tell me what you think.

    Come back, my angel
    Come back to me
    Life is not the same without thee
    Come back, my angel
    Come back to me
    Lay next to me and see what I see
    Come back, my angel
    Come back to me
    Show me my destiny
    Come back, my angel
    Come back to me
    Make my fantasy a reality

    Come, my love
    I will hold thy hand
    I will guide you as you've guided me
    As long as you come back, my angel, my true love
    For life is not the same without thee
     
  2. #2
    BEAVIS

    BEAVIS Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Nov 10, 2003
    Messages:
    197
    Likes Received:
    0



    Very good!!!
    It's so hot :wub:
     
  3. #3
    Jamie

    Jamie Super Member LPA Super Member

    Joined:
    Jun 12, 2003
    Messages:
    3,081
    Likes Received:
    6



    Thats coool
     
  4. #4
    LornVourkolakas

    LornVourkolakas About To Blow Chunks

    Joined:
    Aug 14, 2003
    Messages:
    2,628
    Likes Received:
    25



    Thanks. :blush:
     
  5. #5
    Alacrity

    Alacrity don't stop talking to me; i haven't been listening LPA Super Member

    Joined:
    Jul 12, 2003
    Messages:
    4,937
    Likes Received:
    10



    Awesome Lorn :)
     
  6. #6
    LPNeSSRGB

    LPNeSSRGB Super Member LPA Super Member

    Joined:
    Dec 11, 2003
    Messages:
    4,889
    Likes Received:
    7



    Nice job! :) It made me smile! :D
    I also like how it was short and to the point.
     
  7. #7
    LornVourkolakas

    LornVourkolakas About To Blow Chunks

    Joined:
    Aug 14, 2003
    Messages:
    2,628
    Likes Received:
    25



    It was short because I entered it to a contest. The contest allowed only about 20 lines. If I made it any longer, I wouldn't be able to stop. Heh. "Once you pop, you can't stop." .. Yeah...

    Anyways, I'm glad you guys liked it.
     
  8. #8
    Ppr:Kut

    Ppr:Kut Y2K

    Joined:
    Aug 17, 2003
    Messages:
    2,527
    Likes Received:
    19



    wow, short, simple and really nice. Good job Lorn ;)
     
  9. #9
    LornVourkolakas

    LornVourkolakas About To Blow Chunks

    Joined:
    Aug 14, 2003
    Messages:
    2,628
    Likes Received:
    25



    Thank you.
     
  10. #10
    HARLEYsheXda

    HARLEYsheXda Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Feb 3, 2004
    Messages:
    412
    Likes Received:
    0



    i like the rhyme...

    :)
     
  11. #11
    LornVourkolakas

    LornVourkolakas About To Blow Chunks

    Joined:
    Aug 14, 2003
    Messages:
    2,628
    Likes Received:
    25



    Thanks. :)
     

Share This Page