chorus frustration directed at the weak at heart/ motivated by the darkness that surrounds them/ we've all played in this sinister part/ the solution is more complicated, then it seems/ emotions have gotten the best of us all/ there's never really any answers in the real world/ nothing but riddles to make us fall/ so get back off the ground and try to move forward/ verse 1 we have all been lost once a time and again/ and thought that putting an end would solve it all/ there's always reasons to push through all the pain/ so quit crying of injustice and all, for you to fall/ if you don't want to live your life like this, then go ahead/ don't come crying to me if you don't like what you find/ havent you ever heard of layin in your own bed/ now its no surprise that youve got no faith in mankind/ chorus frustration directed at the weak at heart/ motivated by the darkness that surrounds them/ we've all played in this sinister part/ the solution is more complicated, then it seems/ emotions have gotten the best of us all/ there's never really any answers in the real world/ nothing but riddles to make us fall/ so get back off the ground and try to move forward/ verse 2 you say you're the only one that feels your pain/ and no-one could ever begin to understand it all/ so now you're shouting towards the world once again/ wishing on the inside you had someone to call/ there's no denying you're trying to cry for help/ you say there's nothing that can take it all away/ wondering for the reason all your pain was kept/ how do you know tomorrow isn't the day/ chorus frustration directed at the weak at heart/ motivated by the darkness that surrounds them/ we've all played in this sinister part/ the solution is more complicated, then it seems/ emotions have gotten the best of us all/ there's never really any answers in the real world/ nothing but riddles to make us fall/ so get back off the ground and try to move forward/ verse 3 there's never a quick fix for happiness/ you have to take the ugly with the good/ can you find a way through all the darkness/ finding happiness you wonder if you could/ on the edge thinking about crossing the line/ grounds looking closer today then it was yesterday/ cross that line you'll spend more then just time/ the world is going to move on no matter what you say/ chorus frustration directed at the weak at heart/ motivated by the darkness that surrounds them/ we've all played in this sinister part/ the solution is more complicated, then it seems/ emotions have gotten the best of us all/ there's never really any answers in the real world/ nothing but riddles to make us fall/ so get back off the ground and try to move forward/ outro you've made yourself out to be dead to the world/ have you thought about what i said today/ there's so much more to see in this world/ choosing life or death, what's it going to be today/
Please don't double post. Especially in a three minute time span. People will respond in due time, there's no point in asking what people think three minutes after posting your lyrics as more than likely nobody has read them yet. Give it time, not everyone is on the board all of the time. Please go and read the rules posted in the newbie camp to get a fuller understanding of the rules. Anyway, I quite liked your lyrics. I liked how not every line rhymed with the next and you had some good dialogue in there.