More stuff..hope it's good..."TYPE..."

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Janie Jones, May 7, 2006.

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    Janie Jones

    Janie Jones Meghna is a Headcase

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    Well, I've finally written another one...hope it's up to par.


    Type...

    I cleared the dust off the old machine,
    And my finger lovingly caress’d
    It traced each key in amorous recollection
    Over the ancient platen, it laid to rest.

    Faded back were the reminiscences,
    Of many a day, spent lost in a realm
    Ethereal yet concrete in its ceaseless mystic dimensions,
    In it’s passion, a resonant calm...

    Once more I sat on the ancient chair,
    In it’s agony, there resounded a creak,
    Tremulous were the fingers that once again touch’d,
    And anxious the ears that heard the key speak

    In that one stroke all was forgotten,
    A small tear swabb’d the rust,
    One follow’d the other, till the yellowing sheet emerg’d,
    Encompassing, enlivening the love astray, vanish’d lust...

    A small smile graced my lips,
    Eyes once again laid rest,
    On the yellowing paper snatch’d from the platen in tender ease
    Then crumpled, then straightn’d, lovingly caress’d

    Head drew back, eyes closed, delved deep within memories
    A small teasing gust made the corners ripple,
    Then, as though in mellow severance, it seized it from my clasp
    And in amorous recollection, I let it slip.


    Meghna Sridhar
    May 2006
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    Well?
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    BRAVO!
    *applause*
     
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    GrafiTTied

    GrafiTTied Well-Known Member

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    im going to have to check the dictionary for a few of those words. Your vocabulary is just awesome.
     
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    Janie Jones

    Janie Jones Meghna is a Headcase

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    TransArhaz- *bows and catches flowers...I wish*
    GrafitTied- Merci beaucoup- I'm flattered. I guess all those years of checking up synonyms on MS word for my English homework in the past 3 something years finally paid of...my vocabulary grew from trying to impress my english teacher...:D
     
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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    *applauds*

    another amazing piece of work...

    I think the winner of best writer in this years LPA awards has already been decided...
     

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