Writing: Monostary of Reclusion

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    Erica

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    Something I wrote for a competition on my writers forum.

    I look upon the ruins of time
    Once great walls of marble now lie in desolation
    Shattered stain glass of faces once beloved
    This temple of life now haunted and bare
    And I search these piles of burning disdain for some sort of absolution
    But all I find is contempt
    With heavy eyes and weary soul I bear my burden
    My skin sags and the color in my eyes grows dim
    The statues of what could have been follow me
    Watch with melancholy eyes as I wander my pantheon aimless
    Turning stone over and over, finding only imprints of the past
    I chase shadows for days
    Nothing in front, everything behind
    I call only to hear my own words echo back
    Sometimes my calloused feet find soft grass only to have it wither
    The smell of fresh air drowned out by the centuries
    Sometimes I find space uncharted only to fall back
    I always fall back into my defiled sanctuary
    My monastery of abysmal of reclusion
     
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    Nice! Like the use of imagery.
     
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    Thanks, I've been trying to fit that imagery into something for a while and it finally worked out.
     

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