Mistake

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    Madias04x

    Madias04x Guest




    I'm not quite done with this song. Noticed the "WIP" under the name. Let me know what you think of it, and what I should change about it. Thanks! :D


    Mistake
    [WIP]

    [Verse I]
    I’ve been pushing away
    From something I’ve been afraid of
    Everyday I make the same move
    Always chasing these feelings away
    I’m tired of being scared of my past

    [Pre Chorus]
    Now this time I’m crying out
    To make this a reason to stay

    [Chorus]
    I make this mistake of running away
    There’s something that’s new
    Something renewed
    It’s never too late for you
    There’s always a chance
    Always a way
    To make things better for me

    [Verse II]
    I continue to learn from myself
    That every blood drop sheds
    Is another chance to make it all right
    I want to change who I have been
    I’m tired of being brought down by myself

    [Pre Chorus]
    Now this time I’m crying out
    To make this a reason to stay

    [Chorus]
    I make this mistake of running away
    There’s something that’s new
    Something renewed
    It’s never too late for you
    There’s always a chance
    Always a way
    To make things better for me

    [Bridge]
    I’m not going to live another day like this
    I want to show myself a meaning
    That there’s another side of me
    That’s finally learned to escape pain

    [Chorus]
    I make this mistake of running away
    There’s something that’s new
    Something renewed
    It’s never too late for you
    There’s always a chance
    Always a way
    To make things better for me
     
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    Mr. Benzedrine

    Mr. Benzedrine Rock the 40 Oz

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    Im Impressed, Well Done ^_^ ^_^ ^_^

    9/10
     
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    Madias04x

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    Thanks!
     
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    lpaddict

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    :) thats really good. i dont think you need to change anything!
     
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    Steph

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    Just :eek:
    God! This is perfect material! Don't change anything!
    make this mistake of running away
    There’s something that’s new
    Something renewed
    It’s never too late for you

    ^Loving That^
     

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