a few parts of works in progress. I see my love, burning in your eyes I see my trust, betrayed by your disguise I dont wanna listen to you coz you wont even hear me through when all the voices around you lie there's no where to escape to no way to get through all you can do is hide ---------------------------------------------------- As the rain drops, it hits the ground the sound of the drops tear through me coz thats where ill be laying my body left decaying not much left of my body anyway not since you took it away i can't see the real answer anymore so my only answer is to be cut down to the core ----------------------------------------------------- (This is a very quick rap, and it was actually a freestyle i made up very quickly) The hails the heart as the hail falls, it hits the ground it melts and whats left is the reflection of the darkness that we pretend is fake but you can't always have it your way coz it builds up to give it back but we end up getting stabbed in the back while the blood hits the ground and joins up with the bad past ------------------------------------------------ I just can't see with you in front of me you can't control me well at least you can try Please feel free to leave any comments or suggestions with these and my other four songs.
I like your poems and songs,they're somewhat on the same stuff I write on . I suggest you could make a thread in which you could keep adding your work for us to marvel at