Memories

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    In the beginning nothing ever seemed right
    would anything ever in this light
    what was meant to be has become a distant memory
    so far past that no one else can see
    see how it used to be
    held back by the problems we fought between
    the hatred so strong almost tanglible
    it makes me feel like your the cannibal
    the monster pushing deeper within
    you crush me, and i cant escape
     
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    Cool part of a poem!


    The title makes me think of Beatles songs for some reason :lol:
     
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    Its not a song. me and my best mate wrote it. since she is in a higher english class than me you can tell what parts i wrote and didnt :lol:

    she's in top im in 4th
     
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    Nice, not as good as the two songs, some of it don't make a lot of sense, atleast to me anyways...that and some of the words are to big for me to comprehend. :p
     
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    tanglible? :lol:


    its good but i dont really understand the meaning
     
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    I didn't say it was a song :lol: :p :shifty: :whistle:

    Still good....I say stick to songs and try to get your drummers drumkit soon :lol:
     
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    i didnt come up witht that part. my co writer did.

    I think i will stick to songs. Speaking of which i wrote 3 new songs last night
     
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    And they will be posted when?
     
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    I'm not posting them here. Sorry folks..These are for my eyes only
     

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