I feel like this came together well. I am just working on my raps right now, and I am feeling them. B) No wonder you cant sleep in hell, cause you jigling with bells You want to talk about jobs, you don't even work, so how do you talk about somthing you're not even worth I told you, but you didnt want here it All these ladies around here is praising my lyrics When they here it, they're feeling tip When I playing my songs, I feel like nothings wrong I have gone so far, so high, and so deep I wonder if anyone can still see me My boy J.P claims he's knee deep in the game, but all I see is him praising too deep in the name This isn't just a game, it's my way of life Everyone get out of my sight before I grab my rife Tonight I might have to pull a knife, on everyone trying to ride my bike My pant's are tight, but not huggen my balls I am putting Mariahs Careys picture on my wall This is my call to all who belive they are hard Get out of my way I am driving my f50 car
I can't really appriciate rap like that. So i can't say i like it, but it doesn't mean it isn't good. The flow was fairly good, and the rhymes didn't feel very forced. It had a bit of a focus and wasn't just about nothing which was good.