If you guys could read and tell me what you think of 'May Day' it would mean alot to me. Thank You. It's not suppose to ryhme either. .:May Day:. Liquid aspirations Leak all around him In bed he lies Dreaming of a time back when The clouds would part To tell a story where He could still relate Outside of where he can feel The pines are whispering Telling just what it is he fears Gusts of wind blow The knowledge throughout Now the whole forest knows Feeling lost within himself Clutching what it is He knows is true To hold back what he feels inside There's nowhere to hide It's time to face what it is he fears Peering past the window panes To the vast world beyond Which is most revealing Laying out the plot like a story All in front of his eyes He knows the answer is near It's here where he hurts Like the lone maple Caught in an updraft Hopeless it's how he feels inside None of it will be relavant soon Caught in a place more dangerous He's out of touch with himself Feeling lost within himself Clutching what it is He knows is true To Hold back what he feels inside There's nowhere to hide It's time to face what it is he fears [It's time to face what it is he fears] [It's time to face what it is he fears] [It's time to face what it is he fears] Gazing out the window One final time A bright glimmer catches his eye She's beautiful in every single way A fallen angel in his eyes She's the one that can save him To bring him back to where he can feel In touch with himself He's low on confidence But none of it matters now He approachs her Extending his hand An erie silence falls Over the desolate forest Her eyes don't show it The offer is left unheard