Make Your Own Chorus

I was watching the video and thinking about how they said they wrote 100 differen't choruses for this song, and wondered: Maybe someone could make one up off the top of their head that's similar to one of the ones that got trashed. Even though we all have no idea what any of those could be, indulge me. This is the most creative thing I've come up with all day.

 

Cool idea !


Here's mine:



I want to heal,
The pain I feel,
I never thought it could be real.
I want to let go of the pain I've felt so long,
(I'll feel so much better when it's gone)
I want to heal,
The pain I feel,
It's seems just too damn real.
I'll never found what I've wanted all along,
Somewhere I belong.



Meh...

 

I'm a little nevous doing this but here goes

This is my made up chorus to 'somewhere I belong':

This pain I feel
It will not heal
These Dreams are much too real
I wanna let go of this pain i've held too long
(erase all the pain till its gone)

These scars wont seel
They'll never heal
Realitys's unreal
I wanna find the cure i've wanted all along
Somewhere I belong

Ah well its an atempt...

 

The life that I once knew is gone
(Chase all the pain from my heart)
I don't understand how it ended so wrong
(Losing myself, fall apart)
But now I see where I've been all along
(Chase all the pain from my heart)
Soon I'll find a place where I belong
(Losing myself, fall apart)
Somewhere I belong

 

will thats awesome

 

Will's chorus is awesome

 

My life has taken me
(To places I'd never dreamed of)
It just makes me feel
(I got nowhere to go to rest my mind)
My life has taken me
(To places I'd never dreamed of)
I hope this time it takes me
Somewhere I belong

 

I wanna feel
I wanna heal
My life which seems surreal
I wanna bring my dreams to life today
(erase bad memories till they fade)
I wanna heal
I wanna seal
The years I had to deal
I wanna correct all the things I've done wrong
Somewhere I Belong.

 

This is what I came up with, it's not that great though

It seems like there is nothing more for me
I wish this deep blue haze didn't surround me,
But theres nothing more that I can do
Besides wishing this all wasn't true
(I want to erase the pain)
Even in my dreams I am not safe,
But hopefully one day I will find my place
That place... somewhere I belong...

 

tony's and will's chorusses are good, but I don't think théy'll fit in somewhere I belong. :whistle: the melody and the rythem isn't right, I think.
not personnally

 

That might be true, but this thread was made to make a chorus for 'Somewhere I Belong' not to make it go along with the song or anything...

 

I wanna kill
I wanna Fill
This hole thats not so real
I wanna take away the pain ive held so long
(Throw it away, make it be gone)
I wanna heal
i wanna seal
This is just what i wanna feel
Dont make this pain go on for long
Somewhere i belong.

I came up with this in 2 minutes
Feedback is appreciated

 

I just wanna see the 98 or so other versions of this chorus...most likely many will be much better lyrics

 

I want to leave
Want to be free
Carry on with my own life
I want to find what I've been searching for so long
(Find my place in this senseless world)
Forget the memories
Erase my past
Gotta achieve this on my own
I need to find this place I looked for all along, somewhere I belong

 

This is a dumb one i was thinking of...( the chorus before the bridge )


I wanna heal
I wanna feel
I wanna heal what i feel
Somethings gonna heal when i feel
Something gotta heal

 

I wanna free;
force it to leave
the person dying inside me
i want to let go of the pain i felt so long
(and believe in myself when it's gone)
The fake is real;
How will it heal
when i can't let go of the things i've held so long
Somewhere i Belong...

 

In the wake
If my mistakes
I can't deny that I've lost it all
I wanna find something I've wanted for so long
Somewhere I belong

 

Your brazen lies
I let belie
My power to forsake ties
And now I've lost the truths known to me all along
[The illusion solidifies]
Sighs]
I knew the cost,
Of being one lost,
I've forged my own iron lock,
And I'm trying to close the distance that seems too long,
Somewhere I belong.

Haha, I now officially understand why singers these days can't come up with good lyrics; its so hard to match it with the melody and rhythm that you're forced to take words out of thin air and force it into the song. Well, I've tried my best to rewrite the chorus while matching the melody and rhythm. Tried would be the key word

ALwaysThinkinAboutLinkin-- you;re really good at changing the lyrics without changing the entire sound of the song! Love the line (believe in myself when its gone) Kudos for you!

Nexes--I don't think its dumb. Actually, its quite the opposite--very clever of you to use the same words like that and come up with sentences that sound the same, but convey a much different meaning.

Tony--Dude, your chorus leads so seamlessly into the phrase "Somewhere I belong." I'm very jealous.


Will--That was so smooth man! The repetition (in parenthesis) really enhance it.

 

I wanna cry
I wanna die
I was carelessly left behind
I always try to escape from time to time
(Try not to laugh at my rhymes)
I wanna fly
And touch the Sky
I won't let my life pass me by
I wanna leave this routine by its code i abide
(I know i suck but i tried)
Yet To Myself i've lied

(the stuff between brackets is part of the song)
Yeah, i know i completely changed it, thus ruining it.
But rhymes

 

I wanna cry
I wanna die
I was carelessly left behind
I always try to escape from time to time
(Try not to laugh at my rhymes)
I wanna fly
And touch the Sky
I won't let my life pass me by
I wanna leave this routine by its code i abide
(I know i suck but i tried)
Yet To Myself i've lied

(the stuff between brackets is part of the song)
Yeah, i know i completely changed it, thus ruining it.
But rhymes