Make my day

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by The Outsider, Oct 10, 2005.

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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    Juggling the balls of entrapment,
    Juggling the lives of innocents.

    Shifting of sands has become a sin,
    Shifting of sands has become a virtue.

    My reality wants me dead,
    My reality wants me.

    Only if you could see my tears,
    Only if you could see them drip.

    Persuading, not happening,
    Persuading, not working.

    Percieve only that you desire,
    Percieve onlt that you want me to see.

    If you could walk a rainbow, and never return,
    If you could walk a thousand miles away from here.

    Suicidal teenager, get back what you put in,
    Suicidal teenager, another idiot among them.

    Watch my eyes, as they glisten in the sun,
    Watch my eyes, as they walk away with my feet.

    Another bruise, you inflict.
    Another bruise, to show and tell.

    Think about it, put it back on the show time,
    Think about it, don't waste me away.

    Watching you like an eagle for an eye,
    Watching you, and then watch me walk away.

    Go ahead, kill yourself, you talented drama queen,
    Go ahead, and make my day.
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    it's good...
    *wonders why no one's commented*

    good job,really ;)
     
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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    The Outsider is unloved :( :(
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Don't know. Someeone probably bribed everyone not to say anything. :lol:

    Bull. The Outsider is lovable. :hugz:

    Nice poem. I really like it.
     
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    The Outsider

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    :D
    :hugz: Mali :hugz:
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    HEY!, what did i ever do to you? :(
     
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    The Outsider

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    edit:

    :hugz: TransArhaz n Mali :hugz:
     
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    Seb

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    I'm guessing you were inspired by The Outsider (the A Perfect Circle song)
     
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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    Partily true cos I am a really big APC fan and The Outsider is one of my fav songs.
    But The Outsider is about from a loved ones view of seeing their loved one die from drugs.
    This is about abuse and drugs.
     

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