Okay.. So this is some random text I just wrote. Not sure what it is.. It just sort of came to me. I wrote in it Swedish though, did my best to translate it without destroying it. Not sure how well I did but eh x) (Be considerate of grammar faults, though a few of them are supposed to be there.. lyrics/poems often doesn't make sense grammar wise xD haha) It's a lot better in Swedish IMO.. Sitting here in the dark A gloomy autumn day Thinking about life What are we meant to do? Is there something or someone for us all? Or are we to spend our days alone Surrounded by people, that pass us by Rushing through errands, that doesn’t really matter Are we to stay shadows of our past? Or shall we shine through the dark wall That conceal our life? I'll post the original as well if there are any Swedes here that happens to pass by and want to see the real one x) Sitter här ensam i mörkret En ruggig höstdag Tänker på livet Vad är vi menat att göra? Finns det något eller någon för oss alla? Eller ska vi spendera våra dagar ensamma Omgiven av människor som rusar förbi I brådskande ärenden som egentligen inte har någon betydelse Ska vi förbli skuggor av vårt förflutna? Eller ska vi skina igenom den dunkla vägg Som skymmer våra liv
Not bad. It's like a stream of consciousness. I don't really know Swedish so I have no idea if it's a good poem from a technical stand point such as meter, rhythm and rhyme, so of course I can't really give any advice or criticism on best or weak lines. However in English, I kind of like it.
I like this. I had something like this run through my head the other day. Well written. Not sure about how it'd be in Swedish, but the translated version is awesome