Love.

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    Muri

    Muri It never ends.

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    Why must love,
    be so painful,
    I've always thought,
    it was something gentle,
    something that was a good thing in our lives.
    But now I've felt it,
    I can't stop hating it,
    the pressure of love is taking me in.
    And when you ask me,
    how does it feel,
    then I can't give you the right words.

    It eats you inside,
    takes you over,
    and suffocates you until you give in.
    But if love fails,
    you fall apart,
    because it has driven you in too deep.
    Then you've been betrayed,
    been hit and stabbed,
    and with every time like that,
    you get more and more uncertain,
    wondering if true love even exists.

    That's what has happened to me,
    and probably will happen again.
    I never know when I'm going to fall in love,
    be mesmerized and obsessed,
    and on the next minute,
    shattered and broken.

    I wrote this to a friend. So this one has a dedication. :p
     
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    Il inno di morte

    Il inno di morte A noi si schiude il ciel...

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    well, i believe it's a pretty good one. But I believe true love does exists. It's something so powerful that it can change our way of thinking, the way we act, it makes us want to live or die with the same powerful feeling. I believe you should register on Writers Park :lol:
    awesome, don't you give in!!!
     
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    Muri

    Muri It never ends.

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    ^^ ahh,I really really appreciate you comments. Thank you! ^_^
    And well,my friend doesn't believe in true love. She just keeps getting hurt. :(
     
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    Il inno di morte

    Il inno di morte A noi si schiude il ciel...

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    If you are a true friend, you'll always be there to cheer her up and to give her her all the hope and support she needs. you'll help love to proove it does exists, and when she finds it, she'll be really thankful for finding happiness. ^_^
     
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    Muri

    Muri It never ends.

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    Too true. Thank you. ^_^
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    i like it...another reason for me not to ever fall in love...but seriously, i really like the way you use a wide scope of words and don't reapeat any.keep up the good work...!!!
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    yer, great one, keep writting. this is good. i really like it. hope it helped your friend ;)
     
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    notneo

    notneo Well-Known Member

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    The peom is great . but i hate it .
    Not a good time to read a poem like that .
    sometimes i wish you could know the moral of the story without actually reading it .
     

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