Love of a dying man,first love song/poem

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    saunderitos

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    Love of a dying man

    Born into this world
    Above everyone else
    Cares for no one
    He lives for himself

    So self absorbed and self centred
    Sadness, In his mind it entered
    In him it flourished like a disease
    He began to long for a cool breeze

    He leaves his room, and his house
    And goes in search of love, a spouse
    He guessed it would be the easy way
    Lots of women coming his way

    He soon finds out that he is wrong
    Most of them are sluts in thongs
    But then he sees a different girl
    Shrouded in mystery that he must unfurl

    He went to sit next to her and ask her name
    She noticed in seconds his ‘almighty’ fame
    She got up to leave but he touched her arm
    Never before had he felt so calm

    He speaks to her , asks for a chat
    She agrees and rests on his lap
    She tells him about her horrid life
    Poverty and endless strife

    He then describes his journey through time
    All his joy and living prime
    But then how he go lonely
    He wanted a girl, to feel homely









    the first song of this type ive attempted
     
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    linkinpark_ben25

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    erm..... WOW :D

    very good
     
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    emyly

    emyly freedom can be frightening if you've never felt it

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    You're really great....very good ^_^
     
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    saunderitos

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    thanks :)
     

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