i love you and i hate you to death you take all the girls that take my breath all your relationships and i havent had one you do all the things i wish i couldve done tears of joy stream down my face while all my hate lies in a case you thought i was fine but you were wrong i dont know if i can hold this for very long i cry while writing this i know its pathetic but i need to stop being so apologetic i didnt have a chance with any of 'em because im me not someone else noone can dig deeper than skin and it makes me jealous you date then break up and hate eachother i dont try and date 'em cause your like my brother you didnt know this before but now you do and im writing this all for you...
Even though it has been a while since you first posted this... Thats really good, and I agree with J Money; keep writing.