There's only one choice The forgotten have One more voice Asking one more dance One place to run to One place that is safe One place to turn to She's lost in the maze She's made a wrong turn Got caught up in the mist One more lesson she's learnt The silver flash on her wrist The battle she's lost Got caught up in the mist One more lesson she's learnt The silver flash on her wrist Nobody knows the answer But do they remember the question Is she lost? Can't remember The way back home Is she lost? In the embers Her heart grows cold Nobody knows the answer But do they remember the question
again this was really good. maaybe a little too much repetion but other than that a fab effort! keep wrtting!
I believe we'd all like to find that safe and glorious place where sorrow doesn't exist and us poets aren't rejected cuz we are "different" lol . your poems are very emotionals and you've got a great writing. awesome work!