Lost And Forgotten

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    Tony

    Tony war in your bedroom.

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    LOST AND FORGOTTEN
    Where do I being?
    Today, forgetting about yesterday
    Hello again, do you remember
    I’ve sat here, done nothing
    I’m not going anywhere

    Disremembered lost in the sea
    How did this come to be?
    Neglected torn at the seams
    (Stranded, alone, discarded)
    I want this erased from me

    A wasted life you say?
    Your right, where is the light
    Hello again, I’m misplaced
    I’ve missed my chance
    I’ve gone astray, from the path I wanted to take

    Disremembered lost in the sea
    How did this come to be?
    Neglected torn at the seams
    (Stranded, alone, discarded)
    I want this erased from me

    Taken into the darkness
    Took apart, thrown away (5x)

    Disremembered lost in the sea
    How did this come to be?
    Neglected torn at the seams
    (Stranded, alone, discarded)
    I want this erased from me
     
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    LPNeSSRGB

    LPNeSSRGB Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Great job! ^_^ Very strong emotions are projected effectively in this piece of literature. :) Sadly, I know how you feel...this poem kind of describes how I'm feeling right now...
     
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    Tony

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    Thank You
     
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    Jamie

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    Very good. Love it all
     
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    Tony

    Tony war in your bedroom.

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    Thank You...

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