I'm not quite sure what I should call this piece of writing. It's not really a poem or a song. It has no rhyming scheme. It's simply some thoughts and sentences I strung together and they seemed to fit well. I penned this when an old boyfriend of mine dumped me. Please respond with comments you may have, I'd love to hear what you have to say! Losing Myself I felt I was slowly losing myself My strength was ebbing away I had no purpose in life Nothing to strive for All I was doing was dealing with my feelings And this was killing me When I open my eyes in the morning I'd lie in bed wondering Why do I awake? What do I have to get out of bed for? I had no pressing responbilites No future I cared to think about No you Always the thoughts ended there No you to lead me out of this unending darkness :wth:
Wow that's really good! I love the meaning But um... Sorry, I feel like i'm such nag...but do any of you mind reading my song a little down below, titled "And Die Here"? No one seems to wanna read it I was quite proud of it myself, but I guess no one else is. I just wanted a little credit that's all. But again, VERY awsome poem! B)