Torn apart Demon’s heart Living still Took a pill End this pain End it all Let me fall Into a silent sleep Where all my sufferings must meet I felt used More than abused I was opened Unwillingly This is my ending My happy ending R&R PLEASE hope you liked it
I must agree, for something so simple i'm just like "WOW". I'm not sure what makes this poem so appealing but i really, really like it. The flow is great and the way it rhymes, it's all just fantastic. Great work. B)