Okay, to make this a little more simple, i'm gonna post all my stuff here. Not to steal anyone else's idea, but it does make it easier. I'll try not to post more than one song per two days. Oh, and when theere are a lot, please put what song you are reviewing in the post. Thanks. ------------ "Enough for You" v1 :Running like hell Up one big hill I can't ever stop to chill Or look at the world Still I try To do what you will And resist the temptation Of screaming till shrill All the things i can feel Are quickly smashed beneath your heel. And what's left of the pieces I have to steal. ch Can't you see That this aint me? And all I can be Is never enough Though I can try I cannot fly Cause nothing I do Is enough for you. Will I ever change And become enough You always laugh when I act tough And smile darkly when I turn my back You want too much and don't give slack But now it's my turn If was f###ing hard earned If I try but don't make it I least I now I never faked it. ch br And I will never be As far as I can see Cause there can be only one you And I I will always be me. ch -------------- So what did you think of it? One to ten scales, please.
*forcefully* Post a score you illegitemate offspring of unmarried parents! I figured I may as well have typed it myself, maybe it would then say what I want it to say. Wait, I'm just kidding. Thanks.
Look, I wanna say I'm sorry for both d-posting, and for ressurecting, but I started it forgetting I would be out of town, and I don't want to make a new thread. So please forgive me. I'm sorry. I got a whole new line coming, though. Here's the story. I like this girl, I call her to tell her, and then I fall apart. Enter three days worth of depression so bad I had to be on a caffine high to laugh. Then I finally tell after she totally avoids me for three days. Then she avoids me for the last time we will probably ever be able to spend together. I still like her. She obviously doesn't. This is a demo. <div align=center>"One Way" </div> v1 One way love Doesn't come from above It's straight from hell And takes you outta your shell And off into space You can't recognize anything but her face And it seems like everyone's on your case But you don't care All you ever do is stare And it's rare That you can get away In time enough To not have to tough It out And lose the rest of What's left of your clout At that time It's time to take a new route Make a new rhyme Maybe put your life on the line For what's left that matters Before you lose it And your whole world shatters ch: That's no way to be Staring silently Which you can't stop And everything important in your life Gets the drop. --------------- Still working on V2, but so far I think it is exactly how i feel.