Honestly the more I’ve listened, I do feel that despite its unfinished nature and slight shortcomings (the verses just don’t seem to have the same impact the chorus does), there is a lot of potential in this song. Namely, the chorus is really good, catchy as hell and has a great melody to it. It’s a chorus that I’ve found myself singing to myself a lot the last few days, which is interesting as that usually doesn’t happen with me with demos. I think they should keep this chorus in their back pocket for a future song (if they decide to continue recording as a band), because in the right context this could really soar. Kinda like how the melody for Crawling’s chorus was taken from “Blue” (in itself an average track) and ended up creating one of their most memorable choruses.