Letter to an Enemy

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    a life in ashes, Mar 22, 2005



    to my "friend" who betrayed me....

    Letter to an Enemy

    Get away from me,
    Don’t you try and ruin me,
    What I try to be,
    Can’t you see,
    When the darkness falls,
    Your heart is cold,
    And now I go.
     
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    numbfeeling9

    numbfeeling9 Afraid of you

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    numbfeeling9, Mar 22, 2005



    That's very...powerful. I'd never be able to write a poem like that. Great job! :)
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

    lp_sk8ergurl Well-Known Member

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    lp_sk8ergurl, Mar 22, 2005



    Maybe you should add some more stuff to it, but it does sound good.
     

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