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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    I'm not sure about the title. It was unnamed when I wrote it this summer (and subsequently abandoned it XD). Italics are echoes.

    Please comment, cookies and jellybeans to all who do.

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    Watching the buildings pass me by
    I think about all that has changed
    To get me here
    Walking away
    I’m running

    I’d like to call it moving on
    But inside I know that it’s more like
    Running away from it all
    From you

    I don’t want to dwell on the terms that caused me
    To pack up and leave our home
    But I want you to know
    Haven’t you realised
    I will miss you
    Missing you already

    Moving on
    Running away
    Walking the distance

    So many ways to put it
    The point is I am leaving
    I won’t be here when you wake up
    I won’t be here in the evening
    I’m not going to kiss you goodnight
    Goodbye

    I’ve come to the point
    Where it is move on
    Or walk away
    The choice is mine
    You are the factor

    Boarding the plane with the others
    I await your phone call
    Telling me you care
    I want to know someone cares
    And you won’t let me go
    Please don’t let me go

    I look out of the plane window
    Past the sun
    Is there someone on the tarmac
    Waving at me
    Or is it just another hallucination
    Calling me back

    I wonder that if in five to ten years
    I will return
    To this God-forsaken place
    To you
    Rest worldly eyes on a deserted wasteland
    And cry for old friends
    And cry for broken dreams

    Cry for the former city of hope
    Cry for the friends that meant so well
    Cry for the many chances I had with you

    Leaving, moving, running, deserting
    Crying, wondering, hoping, wishing
    Hating, detesting, loathing, resenting

    So many feelings run through me
    So little time
    So many things I can do
    Couldn’t do

    And as I run out of the plane
    Into your arms
    I realize that this is my home

    And you say the words that have never before passed your lips

    I’m sorry

    And all is right
    For you and me
     
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    Louis

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    That, my friend, is absolutely amazing.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    Just beautiful............................

    It started off a bit shakey, i wasn't really getting into it, but from the start of the plane bit i loved it. Great work.
     
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    Canadian Joe

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    Oh god, I love that ^_^ Keep it up :thumbsup:
     
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    I liked it. For some reason I felt it should have ended with "For now...", but what do I know. Great job as usual.
     
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    Amanda

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    farking beautiful.
     
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    Linja

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    Thank you all so much, it means a lot to me <3
     
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    omg this is amazing everyone hu replied is damn right...
    u keep on surprising me bbz
    keep it up
     
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    Linja

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    Thanks hon <3
     
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    Sexy_Kittie_722

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    this is a very good i enjoyed it from start to end

    good job
     
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    Wyrms

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    There are bits I like and bits I don't, the way it's set out is well done, and the additional theme of confusion put into it is great, but the beginning of it carries a wrongful meaning which categorises feelings and actions into two corners instead of reasoning.
    However, the end of that makes up for it, it holds its own beauty and intensity, I can tell that you'll get better in time as you write from deeper thoughts. Nice job.
     
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    Linja

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    Thank you, that really helped ^_^
     

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