Lavender or Lilac?....

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    Tim2

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    Lavender or Lilac? Lavender or Lilac? Lavender or...

    The Shenandoah slips below the Potomac
    At a town that sleeps in a valley, lush and green
    And there I heard, "It's better to just stumble upon joy, rather than to search for her"
    So I sat upon the banks, and watched the glistening waters
    The waves crashed upon my toes, forgiving this vanity
    While the sounds of a piano carried on some distant bluff
    I was feeling generous so I caught each note
    And sent them downstream to Sherpherdstown, or maybe Frederick..
    The keys, pink and white, played some familiar song
    So I joined in song, I joined in song...

    On a beach, close to my hometown, I finally found hope for my own sincerity
    As I held a small stone in my left hand, and rubbed it with my right
    The sun just then broke from the clouds as I thought
    "Yes, it's smooth. Yes, it's tough. But what lies beneath his well-guarded fortress?
    Can one only believe only all they've seen, all they've touched?"
    Well, I for one just cannot. There just has to be some tender lining
    Some spot where he spills his failures, his individuality, his honesty..
    So I kept rubbing, I kept rubbing...

    I stood at the end of a wharf in Newport News, Virginia
    And watched as each ship would pass, as if on one great, grand parade
    They would steer out into the open sea, their sails aloft
    And for one brief moment I swear I could hear the trumpets, see the chariots
    So I sketched, I sketched, I sketched, for hours on end
    Until I was left with just a song, a ballad, no just one vivid stanza
    It was dusk as the last ship sailed out of port to its' exotic destination
    And on its' hull I saw the face of one lone sailor, long and eccentric, lonely and artistic
    I saw the tears in his eyes, the rope burns on his hands
    So I whispered "Come home young man, come home..."

    I led her through the kitchen, as Courtney's lips fell upon mine
    Her skirt twirled through the furniture, as we danced for hours on the tile
    And when the time came, we laid down together under a quilt in my bedroom
    She read me her favorite poem, one about lovers, lost on an island in the South Pacific
    They spent every day and night trying to escape from their natural cage
    Until they realized they had everything they needed there in one another..
    Then she brushed my hair aside and put her hand on my forehead
    And said "My Tim, you're feeling warm. Just what are you thinking?''
    I told her, "Someday I'll be a famous poet... I swear I'll make you famous."
    So she laughed and said, "My dear, this is where you belong. This is where you belong..."
     
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    Alacrity

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    That was so pretty! Awesome job.
     
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    goso88

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    Whoa, that was very poetic. I'm loving the wistful tone in this poem. And the ending is very touching :) . Sweet job.
     
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    Rather Red

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    awexome
     
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    Luke

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    Very good :thumbsup:
     
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    nintendo_chica

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    that was really poetic and beautiful. really descriptive.

    i loved it :hugz:
     

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