Last Chapter Missing

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Kate, Aug 29, 2004.

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    Kate

    Kate beat me senseless LPA Super Member

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    I wrote this because I'm leaving for college, and my boyfriend has been forbidden to see me or even talk to me until then.


    I'm staring at bare walls
    Boxes of things in my room
    I have but one day till I leave
    And the end comes too soon
    It's all packed away
    There's nothing left to do
    So I'll sit in my silence
    And think sadly of you
    I almost hear your voice
    Across empty space
    How I long to hold you
    And look into your face
    But we can't be together
    As a tear falls from my eye
    I realize I'm leaving
    But I can't say goodbye
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    love the rhyme....real neat...original.....and ture
     
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    *DD*

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    I agree :)

    and I found it beautiful to read, I like reading poems about relationships and love, and also about the problems involved with those 2.

    and I feel a lil' sorry for you coz of your boyfriend being forbidden to see you. :hugz:
     

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