korn writing

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    linkinpark_ben25

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    linkinpark_ben25, Aug 10, 2005



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    here is my latest writing, but i think there is something missing to it, seeing as my other two pieces had something added.

    please tell me how i could improve
     
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    linkinpark_ben25

    linkinpark_ben25 In Your Face!

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    linkinpark_ben25, Aug 10, 2005



    sorry about double posting of thread
     
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    Samurai_CLiD

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    Samurai_CLiD, Aug 10, 2005



    Well it looks pretty good. Constructive critisim: maybe just the felt tip lines. and the colour choice but the actual words are really good
     
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    saunderitos

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    saunderitos, Aug 10, 2005



    its good ben :D

    i think that you should add some paint drips

    the r is awesome :p
     
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    emyly

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    Hey I think it's great *LIKE ALWAYS* ^_^
     
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    linkinpark_ben25

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    linkinpark_ben25, Aug 11, 2005



    wow thanks for the site :D
     
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    Linja

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    Linja, Aug 17, 2005



    I think it was great. And that's all I have to say. :D
     

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