I really like From The Inside and I thought I'd try to write a song with the same idea. Everything is rapped except for the parts in the brackets, the chorus, and the bridge. Please tell me what you think. Killing Me In Everyway Verse 1: Since the day I opened my eyes (I’ve been feeling pain inside) And as much as I wanna end my cries (I quit trying to get rid of the pain in my life) Cuz I tried and tried to avoid this loneliness but I stayed locked up inside with no one but my own self Chorus: I’ll never be alright I’ll always feel this pain Haunting me from inside Killing me in everyway Verse 2: Since the day I saw you cry (my heart's been tearing apart) And as much as I want you to be alright (I quit trying to get rid of the pain in our hearts) Cuz I tried and tried to avoid this darkness but I can't turn on the light without breaking into pieces Chorus: I’ll never be alright I’ll always feel this pain Haunting me from inside Killing me in everyway Bridge (x2) : I've always been the sacrifice I've always been the one who cries Chorus: I’ll never be alright I’ll always feel this pain Haunting me from inside Killing me in everyway