So these are just a couple of poems I wrote at times, friends I show them to say they are really amazing and I should continue writing but I feel that it is just the friendly support they are expected to give so I thought Id see what people who dont really know me think. Please any comments would be nice. ====================== She sits in silence Passenger Seat We exchange no words I feel defeat Her tears still drop I wanna retreat I feel so bad As we turn on her street I stop the car We both are still She seems so far And her face looks ill She finally turns And looks my way I look at her With nothing to say Her makeup streaks She wore it for me Tears on her cheeks I just wanna flee She gives me a kiss And in one heavy sigh She tells me this She tells me goodbye ====================== Early morning Coffee shop It's kind of boring Wish you'd stop Searching me With those eyes What'd you see When they caught mine Your guilty stare Up at me I feel bare I wish you'd leave This is strange And out of place As thoughts exchange But only through face Nothings said And nothings done I sit in dread It's only begun You go to speak You wet your lips You look so meek But it slips The moment passed Just like I You feel glassed And you only sigh Across the table There we sit But not able To admit How far away We both are We've gone astray We've gone so far This isn't working We've gone no where I see you smirking Our thoughts are shared We both see This wont work out You stare at me And begin to pout Your hands i take And hold them tight I can feel them shake You're getting white I won't let go No matter how long Because i know I must stay strong Your to good to lose Your everything I'll fight through the blues And take all the stings I'll do what it takes To make you come back I'll bear all the aches To get us on track I look in your eyes Unsure what i see But it sure not despise Maybe belief in me? I pull you so near And let you know I tell in your ear I'll never let go ====================