Just a Dream?

Just a Dream?

Verse 1:
One, two, three, into the four
Four, three, two, into the one
Counting back and fourth
Not knowing where to stop
I’m being attacked
Lacking what I did before

Chorus:
A dream is a series of images, ideas,
Emotions and sensations occurring’s
(Just a dream)
Involuntarily in the mind during certain stages of sleep
(Just a dream)
But it’s the only place I feel safe
(Where no one can touch me)

Verse 2:
Closing my eyes, counting the sheep
1, 2, 3, and it just goes on
I do this so I can hopefully
In just a few short minutes leave this place
Be somewhere that I’m safe

Chorus:
A dream is a series of images, ideas,
Emotions and sensations occurring’s
(Just a dream)
Involuntarily in the mind during certain stages of sleep
(Just a dream)
But it’s the only place I feel safe
(Where no one can touch me)

Bridge:
1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10
(Just a dream)
10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
(Just a dream)
A place where I am safe
Where a knife won’t cut through
It might be fake, it might be a fantasy
But I’m safe and no one can touch me

Chorus:
A dream is a series of images, ideas,
Emotions and sensations occurring’s
(Just a dream)
Involuntarily in the mind during certain stages of sleep
(Just a dream)
But it’s the only place I feel safe
(Where no one can touch me)

 

I love it!!!!!

 

I like this, the way you describe dreaming and how it's lived . Good job .

 

Thank you!, from both of you , what do soem of you other ppl think out there...

 

Oh dude, thats soo cool

 

oh wow.. your poem/song is great!!! i really like it.. great job!! [i liked the counting.. that was neat.. hehe... ]

 

Thank You

 

I think the vewrses are a little too short. Otherwise great job!

 

thats amazing! i really love the first verse and the chorus!

 

Its very vary good! I like it, too.